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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by ShadowGlow on Fri Aug 23, 2013 3:35 pm

Page 14, I don't mean in a typesetting manner, I meant via words, the idea is D & P are glaring at G and vice versa.

For Page 25, replace the first line with that under sinjoh ruins

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Fri Aug 23, 2013 4:59 pm

The best I can come up with right now is "Dialga and Palkia are glaring at Giratina in pure hostility." That's only one way, so suggestions would be nice. Again, holding off on uploading the new zip until I'm done.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Razor789 on Sat Aug 24, 2013 8:28 pm


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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by zorua on Sat Aug 24, 2013 10:48 pm

ok thanks, I revised it again. I highlighted all the text that needs to be corrected, sorry if it's too much though.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Razor789 on Sat Aug 24, 2013 11:24 pm

It looks much better now, but in this frame (pg28):

For me to survive in the Crack in Time,
and maybe for this instance too.

Pryce says that he may have survived for this instance.
So I think

For me to survive in the Crack in Time
was maybe meant for this instance.

would be better.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by zorua on Sun Aug 25, 2013 12:18 am

yeah, I edited it. so that should be the final version.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Sun Aug 25, 2013 7:12 am

I'm uploading the Chapter 457 RC now.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Mon Aug 26, 2013 7:50 am

It's getting late here, so I'll take a look at it tomorrow after school.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Tue Aug 27, 2013 7:12 am

QC:

ShadowGlow wrote:Page 16
We'll draw its attention to avoid the conflict while they're restrained.

Page 23
Is it possible to move "Who did that" into the other bubble?

Page 25
It's the ruins where the "Mystri Stage" for Arceus's "creation" is located.
Page 7 - Move 'VS Sewaddle', 'VS Woobat' and 'VS Cottonee' a tiny bit to the right, so that it lies straight under the other VS [insert Pokémon here]. Move '96' a tiny bit to the right and then a tiny bit down. Move down 'CH. 458' a tiny bit, so that it's on the same level as the chapter title.
I think this will be the last time I ask you to edit this page (I've made you do this way too many times, sorry. After this time I will try editing it myself in Paint.NET.)
Page 25, 1st white box - Move 'into' from the seventh row to the eight row. It'll look more even that way.
Page 25 - Move the text in the second black box a little bit to the right and a little bit down and move the text in the third black box a tiny bit to the left.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Tue Aug 27, 2013 3:52 pm

Can you open the files in Paint.NET? Anyway, it looks like we're almost done. Hopefully, it won't take this many edits next time. Uploaded a new zip and now I'm going back to hunt for shinies on Black 2. I just got the Shiny Charm, so it won't be long now.~

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:34 am

QC:

Page 10 - Move 'SFX: BZZ BZZ' up a little, so that it's easier to see if sfx belongs to panel four or five. Try moving 'SFX: ZZZZ' to the left. I think it'll look better a little closer to the panel.
Page 25 - Put back the arrows that were in the original RAW scan. If I remember correctly some said that they are preserved in a layer named arrows [something...].
The second sentence in the first white box and the first sentence in the third white box both end without a dot.
Move the vertical HGSS ad dow a little bit so that it ends at the same place like in the RAW scan.
Page 25, 1st white box - Move down 'occur in' to the row under it's current position.
Page 25, 4th white box - Move down 'of the' to the last row.
Page 25, 3rd white box - Move down the first " in "Arceus creation" to the row under it's current position. Move down 'located.' to the row under it's current position. Move down 'exists' to the row under it's current position. Move down 'or' to the row under it's current position.


Next time I will only check the edits mentioned in this QC. Once all of those are ok, I have finetuned page 7 and made the credit page we can release the chapter. No more QCs.

LyokoGirl5000 wrote:Can you open the files in Paint.NET?
If I convert them to PNG, yes. I would prefer to do it in Photoshop so that the PSD and the PNG are identical, but Photoshop lacks the precision that Paint.NET has.

LyokoGirl5000 wrote: Hopefully, it won't take this many edits next time.
Probably not. I will retire as a PokéSpe QCer after this (with a few exceptions and I'll still QC other Pokémon manga). I will also step down as inofficial project manager soon.
I should probably make a some kind of guide for QCers to tell them what kind of mistakes they should look for.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Wed Aug 28, 2013 7:06 am

Uploaded a new zip and pages 10 and 25 separately. Will you be working on some of the other projects here?

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:17 am

Just to clarify: When I replied probably not to that future chapters hopefully won't take that many edits I meant that I think they will take less edits. I was tired, so I didn't think that one through properly.

Yeah, Mobilize!! Pokémon Ranger (if the missing three cleaners ever choose to show up) and pretty much whatever other non-PokéSpe project we pick up.
I want to help scanlating Pokémon manga that I'm not that far behind on reading, that isn't released in such a fast pace and that nobody cares about, so that it can be released in whatever pace is suitable. That would ease up the stress I'm experiencing right now.

I'll check it tomorrow.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Thu Aug 29, 2013 7:50 am

QC:

Page 10 - Move 'SFX: BZZ BZZ' a little to the left, so that it's under the middle of the panel.
Page 25 - The second screenshot has been accidentally moved from where it is supposed to be. Move the text closer to the arrows, like in the RAW. Move up the text in the third black box.
Page 25, 4th white box - There should be a dot after 'creation Pokémon'. Move up 'of' from the last row to the row above.

I will be unable to QC future RCs before Monday afternoon / evening.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Thu Aug 29, 2013 12:14 pm

I reuploaded pages 10 and 25 with fixes.

Edit: Missed some things with page 25. I've reuploaded it.


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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:33 am

I won't be able to check it until Monday afternoon in best case, but I remembered something:

In the page 25 RAW the text inside the black boxes is aligned to the left. I'm not sure what will look better in this scanlation (aligned to the left or centered), but you could try aligning it to the left, so that we can see what looks better.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:47 am

Page 25 -The first and the second screenshots have been changed for the earlier versions. I'll send you the latest correct version to your e-mail so that you either can see how you should revert it, or add changes from the newer versions to the old version with the screenshots displayed correctly, or you can just copy and paste the screenshots from the older correct version.


I'll try to fix page 7 and the credit page tomorrow or the day after that.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Mon Sep 02, 2013 12:13 pm

It was easier to add changes to the older version. I reenabled the arrows and did some changes to the page, especially the third white box, to make it look better. I based the changes on previous QCs. Now uploading...

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by gaspershut on Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:54 pm



hi... where can I find the translation s for Volume 44?

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:54 pm

Nowhere yet unfortunely. We haven't scanlated it yet, we're still working on volume 43.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by gaspershut on Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:56 pm

I'm cleaning the partial scan uploaded by Gamergodess

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Tue Sep 03, 2013 1:30 am

You are? Great! Smile
(I thought that you were only fixing the cover.)
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Tue Sep 03, 2013 6:31 am

QC:

Page 25 - You used the Japanese versions of the first and second screenshots. The last sentence in the first white box should end with a dot.

I'll try to fix page 7 and the credit page tomorrow. Once the issues mentioned above has been fixed and I'm done with page 7 and the credit page we'll release it. We'll aim to release it before Friday, since I will be away from Friday to Sunday.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by some on Tue Sep 03, 2013 7:06 am

Should I replace the background layer of page 23 before that?
I guess now its typsetting is final, right?

/edit: I just looked at another page randomly and it has the old cleaned scan again Neutral 
Please tell me when the typsetting is finished, so I can update the layers again once and for all
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Tue Sep 03, 2013 11:10 am

Yes, the only typesetting that's not final is the typesetting on page 25.
Could you also merge the pages that should be merged? (Should be page 4 and 5 + 14 and 15.)
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