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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Dreamingflower on Fri Aug 16, 2013 9:45 am

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by zorua on Fri Aug 16, 2013 3:52 pm

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i finished a quarter of c458
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:03 pm

I'll upload the final? zip with the fixes Zorua sent me tomorrow.

Edit: Now uploading.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Mon Aug 19, 2013 5:16 am

QC:

Translation issues from zorua's TLC that have not been fixed:
zorua wrote:p006
Archer: ..top commanders of the revived Team Rocket.
Ariana: The lone female of the Team Rocket Executives

p024
awoken on “a long path that even reaches the skies”...

p025
They are necessary items...
I couldn't find '...It exists in the Ruins of Alph...' on page 25 that zorua mentioned in his TLC, so I haven't QCed that part.


Page 6 - Change 'The leader of the revived Team Rocket admins' into 'The leader of the  Team Rocket admins'
Page 10, 1st panel - Change 'Rocket executives' to 'Rocket admins'.

Page 5 - Move the text in the scroll to the right of Crystal down a little and to the left.

Page 6, Lance's description - Move the 'con-' in 'control' down a row.
Page 6, Pryce's description - Move the 'ma-' in 'manoeuvred' down a row. Move down the 'as' in the end of the third row to the fourth row.
Page 24 - Move down 'Unknown' in 'Gender: Unknown' to a new row. Try to get 'kg' to fit on the same row as the rest of the weight info.
Page 25, 1st white box - Move down the 'de-' in 'detached' a row.


I'll QC the chapter list soon.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Mon Aug 19, 2013 6:46 am

Sorry for the errors, I was editing at one in the morning.

I'm not completely sure what to do with Archer's description.  Do you want me to use "The revived Team Rocket Admins." or "The leader of the Team Rocket Admins." in the description?

Other than that, all fixed.  Oh, and the "It exists in the Ruins Of Alph" part was really difficult to find.  I changed it from "exist" to "exists" last time, but I can't find it again.

Now uploading new zip...

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Mon Aug 19, 2013 7:52 am

I think this should be Archer's description:

The leader of the Team Rocket admins, who are the top commanders of the revived Team Rocket. After having controlled Arceus and executed the ritual of creation, he conspires to controll the three legendaries.


I'll QC the update either tonight or tomorrow.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Mon Aug 19, 2013 8:50 am

I uploaded page 6 with Archer's new description separately.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Mon Aug 19, 2013 9:13 am

No you didn't. You uploaded page 7 separately.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Mon Aug 19, 2013 10:51 am

Page 4 - Align 'Gold' to the right, like in the RAW scan.
Page 5 - Align 'Crystal' to the right, like in the RAW scan.
Page 6, Pryce's description - Move down the 'as' in the end of the third row to the fourth row.
Page 6 - Change some things in Archer's description:
The leader of the Team Rocket admins, who are the top commanders of the revived Team Rocket. He conspires to control Arceus to execute the ritual of creation, and hence control the three legendaries.
Page 7 - Move '96' up a little bit, so that it's on the same level as 'CH. 461 VS Tepig'. Move '41' a tiny bit to the right. Move 'VS Arceus VII' a tiny bit to the right. Move 'CH. 461' and 'CH. 462' a tiny bit to the left. Move the four 'VS [Insert Unova Pokémon]' a tiny bit to the left. Make the space between 'CH. 462 VS Sewaddle 107' and 'CH. 463 VS Woobat 133' a tiny bit bigger. Make the space between 'CH. 459 VS VS Arceus VIII 41' and 'CH. 460 VS Arceus IX 62' a tiny bit bigger.
Page 10, 1st panel - Change the typesetting like this:

Rocket
admins
can just
get lost!
Page 24 - Remove the dot in 'Creation Pokémon.'. Make the space between 'Mythical' and 'Pokémon Arceus' smaller by moving down 'Mythical' a bit.
Page 25 - Move up the text in the first and third black box a little, so that it looks kind of like in the RAW scan.


Does 'detached off' sound weird? What do you guys think? (It's in the first white box on page 25.)
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Mon Aug 19, 2013 4:03 pm

Sorry about uploading the wrong page. I'm just so used to uploading page 7...

Anyway, I'm uploading a new zip with the fixes included.

And 'detached off' does seem redundant. I removed the 'off' on page 25. If I have to, I'll put it back in.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Tue Aug 20, 2013 8:59 pm

LyokoGirl5000 wrote:Sorry about uploading the wrong page. I'm just so used to uploading page 7...
That's all right. And yeah, but it looks like page 7 is almost done now, in my opinion.


QC:

Page 6, Archer's description - Try moving down 'Team' from the first row to the second row.
Page 7 - Move down 'CH. 462 VS Sewaddle 107' a little bit. Move all the 'VS [Insert Unova Pokémon]' to the right, so that they are positioned straightly under the HGSS counterparts. Move '96' a really tiny bit down. Move '107' a really tiny bit up.
Page 10, 1st panel - Move up the text in the right speech bubble to the center of the speech bubble.
Page 25 - Move down the text in the second black box a tiny bit.
Page 25 - I've talked with zorua. According to him it the 'detached off' part should be separated / detached from. I personally think that separated sounds best, but that's just me.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Razor789 on Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:04 am

I don't have access to zorua's Google Drive. Maybe we should create a thread with a member list and e-mail adresses? If we'll have more people joining us later, it'll be more convenient.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:40 am

I have sent an e-mail to zorua about it.

At least I don't want my e-mail address to be public. A Google Group would be more practical, if anyone wants to make one and name it Team Special Scans. That way, we just have to add new members into the group and everyone will have access to everything.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Razor789 on Wed Aug 21, 2013 7:40 am

So I just went and created one Smile. I don't know if this link is valid for non-group members, but here it is:
https://groups.google.com/forum/#!forum/team-special-scans
Please, send me a PM with your emails, and I'll send out the invitations.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:02 am

I have everyone's e-mail addresses (well, except for ShinySneasel). I'll send them to you via e-mail.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Razor789 on Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:55 am

Okay, I've sent invitations to all e-mails Manga Reader X had sent me. If someone didn't get an invitation, PM me.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Wed Aug 21, 2013 9:34 am

Uploaded a new zip with fixes. Can anyone tell me how the Google Group works? I accepted the invitation.

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Wed Aug 21, 2013 9:41 am

I don't know. Never used it.

Here's some pages that might help:
https://support.google.com/drive/answer/2494822?hl=en (Scroll down to 'Add lots of collaborators quickly by sharing with a Google Group')
https://support.google.com/groups/?hl=en
https://www.google.com/?hl=en#fp=28e8645e5049d2cf&hl=en&q=Google+Groups+tutorial
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Wed Aug 21, 2013 9:45 am

Thanks!

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Thu Aug 22, 2013 1:07 pm

Apparently we just have to write Team Special Scans in the Google Drive 'sharing box', save it and everyone will have access to that file.
(By the way, we shouldn't have the 'Notify people via e-mail option enabled' when sharing files, since all those notifications will just spam up everyone's inboxes.)


Sorry that I haven't QCed the latest RC. I'm moving the day after tomorrow, so things are a little bit hectic at the moment. I will try to have it QCed tomorrow.

I love manga has finished her TLC and she has sent it to ShadowGlow.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Fri Aug 23, 2013 4:56 am

It looks like I won't have time to QC the newest RC today. I'll try to QC on Sunday when I have moved. (Assuming that my computer still works when I've packed it up and that the Internet connection there is working).
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by ShadowGlow on Fri Aug 23, 2013 7:46 am

Here's the stuff that I ran through again with i love manga's TLC

Page 14
Dialga and Palkia,
and Giratina

Can we make it like Dialga and Palkia are grouped together?

Page 15
That would soon unfold between the three created beings. VS That would soon unfold between the three that have been created

Take whichever's better

Page 16
We'll draw its attention to avoid the conflict while they're restrained.

I overthought this because they weren't restrained at least not physically.

Page 23
Is it possible to move "Who did that" into the other bubble?

Page 25
It's the ruins where the "Mystri Stage" for Arceus's "creation" is located.

This is because I don't know Pokemon enough D=

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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Dreamingflower on Fri Aug 23, 2013 8:32 am

Razor789 wrote:Okay, I've sent invitations to all e-mails Manga Reader X had sent me. If someone didn't get an invitation, PM me.
If you still don't have SninySneasel's Mail I can send it to you.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by Manga Reader X on Fri Aug 23, 2013 8:43 am

Nope, he doesn't have it. I gave him all e-mail addresses I had and I didn't have ShinySneasel's. Please send me his e-mail address as well. You can send it to my e-mail address.
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Re: Volume 43 and 44 (edited)

Post by LyokoGirl5000 on Fri Aug 23, 2013 3:07 pm

ShadowGlow, can you be more specific about pages 14 and 25?  I also don't think I can squeeze Dialga and Palkia into one row without making the text really small. I'm going to wait to upload the new zip for now.

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